Level 3 - 30 out of 40 marks-A good attempt
-Creative use of titles (hand written/drawn) but mise en scene needs lots more care.
(5)-Lipsyncing good
-2 characters styled well, appropriate genre, theme of song
-Some shots very blurry e.g. mobile phone
(2)-Writing on hand and titles must be neater/artier - just not so slapdash
(2)(5)-Hugging scenes look a bit weak
-Calendar element - should move through year instead of repeating same month.
(2)(5)after getting my feedback from my teacher, i understand many things i need to push my work to a level 4, the main issues i need to attend to (numbered according to the mark scheme) are:
(2) framing a shot
(5) mise en scene
these numbers are represented alongside comments to clearly show where the issues have arisen.